Sog‘liq mavzusidagi Task 2 savollari ko‘pincha mas’uliyat haqida: odamning sog‘lig‘i uchun kim javobgar — uning o‘zi, oilasi yoki davlat? Qolgan savollar shu atrofda: profilaktika yoki davolash, soliq va taqiqlar, bolalar harakati, texnologiya va tibbiyot. Band 7 ga yaqin javob tibbiy maslahat bermaydi; u siyosat va odatlar haqida mantiqiy dalil keltiradi va mutlaq da’volardan qochadi.
Bu sahifada 6 ta mashq savoli, g‘oyalar jadvali, 14 ta collocation, to‘liq namuna esse va reja mashqi bor. Savollar mashq uchun tuzilgan, haqiqiy imtihon savollari emas.
Savollarning to‘rt oilasi va 6 ta mashq savoli
Mas’uliyat: davlatmi yoki shaxs?
- Discussion: Some people think the government is responsible for the health of its citizens, while others believe individuals should take responsibility for their own health. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
- Opinion: Some people think governments should put a tax on sugary drinks and fast food to improve public health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Profilaktika va davolash
- Opinion: Governments should spend more money on preventing illness than on treating it. Do you agree or disagree?
- Problem–solution: Many people take medicine without consulting a doctor. What problems does this cause, and how can they be solved?
Bolalar va harakat
- Two-part: Children today are less physically active than in the past. Why is this? What can be done about it?
Texnologiya va sog‘liq
- Advantages outweigh: Many people now use fitness apps and smartwatches to monitor their health. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Ikki savolli promptlarni qanday bo‘lish haqida: IELTS two-part question essay.
Namuna esse: shirin ichimliklarga soliq (opinion)
Mashq namunasi — rasmiy ball emas.
Sugary drinks and fast food have become part of everyday life in many countries, and doctors often link them to problems such as obesity, diabetes and tooth decay. Some argue that governments should make these products more expensive through taxation. I largely agree, as long as the money raised is spent on making healthy choices easier.
The main reason I support such a tax is that price shapes everyday decisions. A teenager buying a drink after school usually chooses the cheapest option, and if a large bottle of soda costs less than water, the healthier choice is effectively punished. Raising the price of sugary products shifts this balance without banning anything: people can still buy them, but they are nudged towards alternatives, much as higher taxes on cigarettes are used to discourage smoking.
Moreover, a tax can pay for prevention. If the revenue were used to build sports grounds in neighbourhoods, provide free drinking water in schools or fund regular check-ups at local clinics, the policy would do more than simply make unhealthy food expensive; it would give families practical ways to live more healthily.
Critics argue, fairly, that such taxes hit low-income households hardest, since they spend a larger share of their income on food. However, this is precisely why the money should return to these communities in the form of cheaper fruit and vegetables and free facilities. A tax that is used well can therefore benefit the very people who pay most of it.
In conclusion, I agree that taxing sugary drinks and fast food is a reasonable way to improve public health, because it changes everyday choices and can fund prevention. Its success, however, depends on spending the revenue on those who need healthy options most.
(Taxminan 300 so‘z.)
Tahlil qisqacha:
- Pozitsiya va shart (largely agree, as long as…) kirishda, 4-paragrafda va xulosada bir xil.
- Ehtiyotkor til: often link, usually, can. Esse tibbiy fakt e’lon qilmaydi, siyosat haqida bahslashadi.
- E’tiroz (Critics argue, fairly…) tan olinadi va kirishdagi shartga bog‘lab javob beriladi.
- Xulosa yangi g‘oya qo‘shmaydi. Xulosani shunday yozish haqida: IELTS essay conclusion.
G‘oyalar jadvali: O‘zbekistondan misollar bilan
| Yo‘nalish | Dalil | Mahalliy misol |
|---|---|---|
| Ovqatlanish | Muammo ovqatning o‘zida emas, miqdor va chastotada | To‘y va mehmondorchilikda osh, somsa va shirinliklar ketma-ket bir necha kun |
| Shirin ichimliklar | Narx va qulaylik tanlovni belgilaydi | Maktab yonidagi do‘konda gazli ichimlik suvdan ko‘ra ko‘zga ko‘proq tashlanadi |
| Jismoniy faollik | Sport imkoniyati uyga yaqin bo‘lsa, ko‘proq ishlatiladi | Mahalla sport maydonchalari, parklardagi ochiq trenajyorlar |
| Profilaktika | Kasallikni erta aniqlash davolashdan arzonroq | Oilaviy poliklinikada muntazam tekshiruv |
| O‘zicha dori ichish | Noto‘g‘ri dori va dozaning xavfi | Shifokorga bormasdan dorixonadan "kuchliroq dori" so‘rash odati |
| Ruhiy salomatlik | Stress ham sog‘liq masalasi | Kirish imtihonlari oldidan o‘quvchilarning bosimi |
| Masofaviy tibbiyot | Chekka hududlarga mutaxassis maslahati yetib boradi | Viloyatdagi bemor poytaxtdagi shifokor bilan video orqali maslahatlashadi |
Esse’da tibbiy raqam yoki "olimlar isbotladi" deb yozishga hojat yo‘q. Aniq tibbiy ma’lumot kerak bo‘lsa, uni shifokor yoki Sog‘liqni saqlash vazirligining rasmiy manbalaridan tekshirish kerak; IELTS esse esa mantiq va misol bilan baholanadi.
Sog‘liq mavzusi uchun 14 ta collocation
| Collocation | Tarjima | Misol gap |
|---|---|---|
| public health | aholi salomatligi | Tobacco taxes are often used to protect public health. |
| a sedentary lifestyle | kam harakat turmush tarzi | Office work often leads to a sedentary lifestyle. |
| a balanced diet | muvozanatli ovqatlanish | A balanced diet includes plenty of vegetables. |
| processed food | qayta ishlangan oziq-ovqat | Processed food is often high in salt and sugar. |
| take regular exercise | muntazam jismoniy mashq qilmoq | Adults should take regular exercise. |
| preventive medicine | profilaktik tibbiyot | Preventive medicine saves money in the long run. |
| a regular check-up | muntazam tibbiy ko‘rik | A regular check-up can detect problems early. |
| chronic diseases | surunkali kasalliklar | Chronic diseases require long-term treatment. |
| healthcare system | sog‘liqni saqlash tizimi | An ageing population puts pressure on the healthcare system. |
| access to healthcare | tibbiy yordamdan foydalanish imkoniyati | Rural residents often have limited access to healthcare. |
| take medicine | dori ichmoq | Never take antibiotics without a prescription. |
| mental health | ruhiy salomatlik | Exam stress can affect teenagers’ mental health. |
| life expectancy | umr davomiyligi | Life expectancy has risen in many countries. |
| raise awareness of | ... haqida xabardorlikni oshirmoq | Schools can raise awareness of healthy eating. |
Bunday so‘zlarni tartibli yig‘ish va to‘g‘ri ishlatish haqida: IELTS Writing lexical resource.
Sog‘liq mavzusida ko‘chma xatolar: dori ichmoq, sport qilmoq
| Xato | To‘g‘ri | Nega |
|---|---|---|
| drink medicine | take medicine | O‘zbekcha "dori ichmoq" so‘zma-so‘z tarjimasi |
| make sport | do sport / exercise | Rus tilidagi заниматься спортом kalkasi |
| healthy system | healthcare system | Healthy — sog‘lom; tizim uchun healthcare |
| Health food is important. | Healthy food is important. | Health food odatda maxsus do‘konlarda sotiladigan parhez mahsulotlarini bildiradi |
| People must eat only vegetables. | People should eat more vegetables. | Mutlaq talab o‘rniga real tavsiya |
| Fat people should… | People who are overweight should… | Neytral, hurmatli til |
| Many healths problems | Many health problems | Sifatlovchi vazifasidagi ot ko‘plik olmaydi |
Reja mashqi: dalillarni ikki qarashga ajrating
Discussion savoli: Is health mainly the responsibility of the government or of individuals? Quyidagi dalillarni ikki guruhga ajrating, so‘ng o‘z pozitsiyangizni bir gapda yozing.
- Ovqat va sport tanlovini har kim o‘zi qiladi.
- Toza suv va sifatli poliklinika bitta oila hal qila oladigan masala emas.
- Kattalar o‘z odatlarini o‘zgartirishni istamasa, qonun yordam bermaydi.
- Kam ta’minlangan oilalar sog‘lom ovqatga pul topa olmasligi mumkin.
- Soliq va reklama cheklovlari millionlab odamlarning tanloviga ta’sir qiladi.
- Bolaning odatlari oilada shakllanadi.
Namuna javoblar
- Shaxs mas’uliyati: 1, 3, 6.
- Davlat mas’uliyati: 2, 4, 5.
- Pozitsiya namunasi: Although individuals make daily choices about food and exercise, I believe governments carry the greater responsibility, because they control the conditions, from clean water to food prices, that make healthy choices possible.
- Paragraf rejasi: 2-paragraf — shaxs tomoni (1 va 6, misol: oilada ovqatlanish odati). 3-paragraf — davlat tomoni (2 va 5, misol: suv ta’minoti, soliq). 4-paragraf — o‘z fikringiz (4-dalil bilan: sharoit bo‘lmasa, shaxsiy tanlov cheklangan).
3-dalil qaysi guruhga kirishi bahsli: u shaxs tomonini qo‘llaydi, lekin "qonun yordam bermaydi" degan qism davlat tomoniga qarshi e’tiroz sifatida ham ishlatilishi mumkin. Imtihonda bunday dalilni qayerga qo‘yishni o‘zingiz hal qilasiz — asosiysi, pozitsiyangizga mos bo‘lsin. Shu mavzudagi og‘zaki savollar: IELTS Speaking Part 3 health.
Sog‘liq haqidagi dalillarni gapirib ko‘rish
Bu mavzuda ko‘p nomzod "sog‘liq muhim" deyishdan nariga o‘tolmaydi. BandMate ilovasida Bandi bilan yuqoridagi discussion savolini muhokama qiling: u sizdan aniq misol so‘raydi va gapdagi xatolarni tuzatadi. Bu tibbiy maslahat ham, rasmiy Writing bahosi ham emas — dalillarni tayyorlash mashqi.
