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IELTS two-part question essay: ikki savolga reja va namuna

Ikki savolli IELTS Task 2 (direct question) essay: savolni ajratish, paragraf rejasi, izohli namuna, so‘z tartibi xatolari va javob kalitli mashqlar.

IELTS Task 2 savolidagi ikki alohida savol ikki xil rang bilan belgilangan va har biriga body paragraf ajratilgan reja

Two-part question (direct question) essay’da Task 2 savoli ikkita alohida savol beradi, masalan Why is this happening? Is this a positive or negative development? Eng ishonchli reja: har bir savolga alohida body paragraf, kirishda ikkala savolga qisqa javob va xulosada ikkalasini yana bir marta yopish. Savollardan biriga to‘liq javob berilmasa, Task Response mezonida band cheklanadi.

Rasmiy formatga ko‘ra Task 2 da kamida 250 so‘z yoziladi, taxminan 40 daqiqa beriladi. Rasmiy band descriptorsda band 7 uchun savolning barcha qismlariga javob berish talab qilinadi; band 6 da esa ba’zi qismlar boshqalariga qaraganda to‘liqroq yoritilgan bo‘lishi mumkin. Quyidagi savol va essay mashq uchun yozilgan.

Ikki savolli promptlarning keng tarqalgan juftliklari

Savollar juftligiBody 1Body 2Pozitsiya kerakmi?
Why? + Positive or negative?SabablarBaho va asoslashHa, 2-savolda
Why? + What can be done?SabablarYechimlarYo‘q, lekin yechim sababga mos bo‘lsin
What problems? + How to solve?MuammolarYechimlarYo‘q
Why? + Do you think this will change?SabablarKelajak haqida fikrHa
What are the benefits? + Are there any drawbacks?FoydalarKamchiliklarFaqat so‘ralsa

Muammo va yechim so‘ralgan turga alohida qo‘llanma bor: IELTS Writing problem–solution essay. Bu sahifadagi misol esa sabab va baho juftligi.

Mashq savoli

In many countries, young people are leaving villages and small towns to live and work in large cities. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Savolni ikkiga ajratish

Savolni o‘qigach, ikkala savol ostiga turli belgi chizing va qog‘ozga shunday yozing:

  • Mavzu: yoshlar qishloqdan katta shaharga ko‘chmoqda.
  • 1-savol (Why?): ish va maosh; ta’lim, universitetdan keyin qolish.
  • 2-savol (Positive or negative?): asosan ijobiy — yoshlarga imkoniyat, oilaga pul yuborish. Salbiy tomoni — qishloqda ishchi kuchi kamayadi; yechim — qishloqda masofaviy ish va internet.

2-savol baho so‘raydi. Both positive and negative deb qoldirish javob emas: qaysi tomon ustun ekanini ayting.

Izohli namuna essay

In many countries, young adults are leaving rural areas to settle in large cities. This essay will explain why this is happening and argue that, although the trend causes problems for villages, it is mainly a positive development.

The main reason for this movement is economic. Well-paid jobs in sectors such as IT, finance and services tend to be concentrated in big cities, while work in rural areas is often seasonal or poorly paid. Education is a second factor. Most universities are located in cities, so a school leaver from a village who wants a degree usually has to move, and many decide to stay after graduating because their new skills are in demand there. A young person from a small town who studies computer science in Tashkent, for instance, is likely to find far more job offers in the capital than at home.

In my opinion, this trend is largely positive. For young people themselves, moving to a city means a wider choice of careers and the chance to earn more than their parents did. Many also send money home, which supports families in rural areas. It is true that villages lose energetic workers and some are left with mostly older residents. However, this problem is better solved by creating opportunities in rural areas, for example through remote work and reliable internet, than by discouraging people from leaving.

In conclusion, young people move to cities mainly for jobs and education. Although this can weaken rural communities, I believe it is a mostly positive development, especially if investment also reaches the places people are leaving.

Essay taxminan 265 so‘z.

Izohlar:

  • Kirish ikkala savolga javobni oldindan beradi: explain why (1-savol) va mainly a positive development (2-savol). Why this is happening — bilvosita savol, so‘z tartibi darak gapdagidek.
  • Body 1 faqat sabablarga bag‘ishlangan: iqtisodiy sabab va ta’lim. Baho yo‘q. Paragraf aniq misol bilan tugaydi.
  • Body 2 In my opinion bilan 2-savolga o‘tadi. Salbiy tomon tan olingan (It is true that…), lekin However bilan pozitsiya saqlangan.
  • Ehtiyotkor til: tend to be, often, most, many, is likely to. Uydirma foiz yoki raqam yo‘q; bu Task 2 da kerak emas.
  • Xulosa ikki gapda ikkala savolni yopadi: birinchi gap 1-savol, ikkinchisi 2-savol.

O‘zbek o‘quvchilar qiladigan xatolar

  • Bitta savolga 200 so‘z, ikkinchisiga bitta gap. Reja bosqichida har savolga bitta paragraf ajrating va ularni taxminan teng qiling.
  • Ikkala savol har paragrafda aralash. Body 1 da sabab ham, baho ham bo‘lsa, imtihonchi javobni qidirishga majbur bo‘ladi.
  • Bilvosita savolda so‘z tartibi. This essay will explain why is this happening. O‘zbek va rus tillarida bu farq yo‘q. To‘g‘ri: why this is happening.
  • Pozitsiyasiz baho. There are both positive and negative sides. To‘g‘ri: Overall, the benefits outweigh the drawbacks, because…
  • Artikl va infinitiv. They move to city for find job. To‘g‘ri: They move to the city to find work yoki to find a job.
  • Umumiy xulosa. In conclusion, there are many reasons and effects. To‘g‘ri: asosiy sabab va bahoni aniq takrorlang.

Pozitsiya va sabablarni bir yo‘nalishda ushlash bo‘yicha qo‘shimcha misollar IELTS opinion essay sahifasida.

Mashq 1: ikki savolni toping va paragraf ajrating

Har bir savol uchun Body 1 va Body 2 nima haqida bo‘lishini yozing.

  1. More and more people are choosing to work from home. What are the reasons for this? What problems might it cause?
  2. Many children today do less physical activity than in the past. Why is this the case? What can be done to change it?
  3. Some adults are returning to university to study in their 40s and 50s. Why do they do this? Is this a good thing?
  4. Fewer people now read printed newspapers. What has caused this? Do you think newspapers will disappear completely?

Javob kaliti:

  • 1. Body 1 — sabablar (texnologiya, yo‘l vaqti, moslashuvchan grafik). Body 2 — muammolar (yolg‘izlik, ish va uy chegarasi). Pozitsiya shart emas.
  • 2. Body 1 — sabablar (ekran vaqti, xavfsiz o‘yin joyi yo‘qligi). Body 2 — yechimlar, har biri sababga bog‘langan (maktabda sport soati, hovlilarni obodonlashtirish).
  • 3. Body 1 — sabablar (kasb almashtirish, yangi ko‘nikma). Body 2 — baho va pozitsiya (Yes, largely, because…).
  • 4. Body 1 — sabablar (onlayn yangilik, reklama pulining ketishi). Body 2 — kelajak haqida aniq fikr (I do not think they will disappear completely, because…).

Mashq 2: so‘z tartibini tuzating

  1. This essay will discuss why do people move to cities.
  2. It is not clear what are the main reasons.
  3. I will explain how can this problem be solved.
  4. Many people wonder whether is this trend positive.
  5. The question is why young people are leaving villages.

Javoblar:

  1. …why people move to cities.
  2. …what the main reasons are.
  3. …how this problem can be solved.
  4. …whether this trend is positive.
  5. To‘g‘ri — o‘zgartirish shart emas.

Mashq 3: to‘liq essay

Mashq 1 dagi 3-savolni oling. 5 daqiqa reja, 30 daqiqa yozish, 5 daqiqa tekshirish. Tekshirishda ikkita marker bilan ishlang: 1-savolga tegishli gaplarni bir rangda, 2-savolga tegishlilarni boshqa rangda belgilang. Ranglar aralash paragrafda uchrasa, rejani qayta ko‘ring. Task 2 ning boshqa turlari IELTS bo‘limida.

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