Multilevel Writing Email: 50 va 120–150 so‘zli namuna xatlar

Multilevel Writing 1-qismida tashkilotdan kelgan qisqa xatni o‘qib, unga ikki xil javob yozasiz: do‘stingizga taxminan 50 so‘zli norasmiy email va menejer yoki mijozlar xizmatiga 120–150 so‘zli rasmiy email. Ikkala xat bir vaziyat haqida, lekin uslubi butunlay boshqacha. Quyida rasmiy talablar, mashq topshirig‘i, ikkita to‘liq namuna, 25 daqiqalik reja va eng ko‘p uchraydigan xatolar bor.

1-qism talablari

Agentlik 2025-yil oktyabrida e’lon qilgan yozish bo‘limining yangi topshiriq tafsilotlarida:

Kiruvchi xat 50–80 so‘zdan iborat, rasmiy va shaxssiz uslubda bo‘ladi. Unda javob berilishi kerak bo‘lgan 3 ta band bo‘ladi. Har bir email uchun alohida 1–2 gapli ko‘rsatma xat kimga va nima maqsadda (shikoyat, muqobil taklif, maslahat) yozilishini aytadi. Yozish bo‘limiga jami 60 daqiqa beriladi; 1-qism uchun taxminan 25 daqiqa tavsiya etilgan.

Multilevel formati sahifasida ham shu tavsif bor. Eski manbalarda, jumladan agentlik saytining ba’zi sahifalarida, bitta 150 so‘zli rasmiy xat haqidagi eski tavsif hali uchraydi. Imtihon oldidan eng oxirgi sanadagi rasmiy hujjatga tayaning.

Mashq topshirig‘i

Quyidagi topshiriq mashq uchun yozilgan; rasmiy test materiali emas.

You are a member of a sports centre. You have received this email from the manager:

Dear members, We are sorry to inform you that our swimming pool will be closed for repairs from 1 November for two months. During this time, you can use the pool at our Yunusabad branch, freeze your membership, or get a 30% discount on gym classes. Please let us know which option you prefer by 20 October. Any suggestions are also welcome. Best regards, Dilnoza Karimova, Manager

Task 1.1. Write an email to your friend, who also swims at this centre. Tell them how you feel about the news and what you are going to do. Write about 50 words.

Task 1.2. Write an email to the manager. Say how you feel about the closure, which option you prefer and why, and make a suggestion. Write 120–150 words.

Namuna: Email 1 (norasmiy, ~55 so‘z)

Hi Sardor,

Have you seen the email from the sports centre? The pool’s closing for two whole months! I’m really annoyed because I’d just started training for the half-marathon. The Yunusabad branch is too far for me, so I’ll probably freeze my membership. What about you? Maybe we could go running together instead?

Cheers, Aziz

Izohlar:

• Hi Sardor va Cheers — do‘stona boshlanish va yakun.
• The pool’s closing, I’m, I’ll — qisqargan shakllar norasmiy uslubga mos.
• really annoyed — his-tuyg‘u (1-talab); I’ll probably freeze — reja (2-talab).
• What about you? Maybe we could… — do‘stga savol xatni jonli qiladi, lekin so‘z chegarasidan chiqmaydi.

Namuna: Email 2 (rasmiy, ~140 so‘z)

Dear Ms Karimova,

Thank you for letting us know about the repairs to the swimming pool. While I understand that the work is necessary, I must say I was disappointed by the timing, as November and December are the months when I swim most regularly.

Of the options you have offered, I would prefer to freeze my membership. It would take me over an hour to reach the Yunusabad branch by public transport, and since I do not use the gym, the discount would not be useful to me.

I would also like to make a suggestion. Would it be possible to extend the opening hours of the Yunusabad pool in the evenings during the repairs? This would allow members who work full-time to continue swimming.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Yours sincerely,
Aziz Rakhimov

Izohlar:

• Uchala talab alohida paragrafda: his-tuyg‘u (1-paragraf), tanlov va sabab (2-paragraf), taklif (3-paragraf). Tekshiruvchi ularni tez topadi.
• Muloyim norozilik: I must say I was disappointed — I am very angrydan ko‘ra rasmiy va baribir aniq.
• Rasmiy grammatika: Would it be possible to…?, This would allow… — B2 darajadagi shartli va muloyim tuzilmalar.
• Qisqarishlarsiz: do not, I would. Rasmiy xatda don’t, I’d ishlatmang.
• Ism bilan murojaat: xat yuboruvchining ismi ma’lum, shuning uchun Dear Ms Karimova va Yours sincerely. Ism noma’lum bo‘lsa: Dear Sir or Madam va Yours faithfully.

Uslubni taqqoslash

25 daqiqalik ishlash tartibi

1. 2 daqiqa — o‘qish. Kiruvchi xatdagi 3 ta bandni va ikki ko‘rsatmadagi fe’llarni (tell, say, suggest, complain) tagiga chizing.
2. 1 daqiqa — Email 1 rejasi. Ikki qator: his-tuyg‘u, reja.
3. 6 daqiqa — Email 1ni yozish. 45–60 so‘z oralig‘ida qoling. Uzun do‘stona xat qo‘shimcha ball bermaydi, ikkinchi xatdan vaqt oladi.
4. 2 daqiqa — Email 2 rejasi. Har bir talab uchun bitta paragraf va bitta sabab yoki misol.
5. 11 daqiqa — Email 2ni yozish.
6. 3 daqiqa — tekshiruv. So‘zlarni sanang (3 qatordagi o‘rtacha so‘z sonini qatorlar soniga ko‘paytirish tez usul), qisqarishlar, Dear… / Yours… mosligi va imloni tekshiring.

O‘zbek o‘quvchilarining tipik xatolari

Yana bir keng tarqalgan muammo — uchinchi talabni unutish. Rasmiy mezonda topshiriq talablarini qamrab olish birinchi o‘rinda turadi. Yozib bo‘lgach, har bir talab yoniga xat ichida belgi qo‘ying.

Tezkor test: rasmiy yoki norasmiy?

Har bir ibora yoniga F (formal) yoki I (informal) yozing.

• 1. I would appreciate a quick reply.
• 2. Can’t wait to see you!
• 3. I am writing to express my concern about…
• 4. Guess what happened at the club?
• 5. Please find attached my receipt.
• 6. Let me know what you think.
• 7. I regret to say that the service was unsatisfactory.
• 8. Take care!

Kalit: 1 — F; 2 — I; 3 — F; 4 — I; 5 — F; 6 — I (neytral-norasmiy); 7 — F; 8 — I.

Mashq to‘plami: 2 ta topshiriq va namuna rejalar

A. Til markazi. Xat: Online evening courses will move to Saturday mornings next month. Students can switch to Saturdays, join a weekday group at a different time, or receive a refund for the remaining lessons. Please reply by Friday.

Email 1 (do‘stga, ~50 so‘z): munosabat + qaysi variantni tanlaysiz.

Email 2 (direktorga, 120–150 so‘z): o‘zgarish haqida fikr, tanlov va sabab, muqobil taklif.

Namuna reja (Email 2): 1-paragraf — xat uchun minnatdorchilik, shanba ertalab ishlashingiz sababli noqulaylik. 2-paragraf — hafta ichidagi guruhni tanlaysiz, qaysi vaqt mos. 3-paragraf — taklif: darslar yozuvini guruhga yuborish. Yakun: I look forward to your reply.

B. Onlayn do‘kon. Xat: Your order has been delayed by two weeks because of high demand. You can wait for the original item, choose a similar model that is available now, or cancel the order for a full refund.

Email 1: do‘stga — kutgan sovg‘angiz kechikishi, nima qilasiz.

Email 2: mijozlar xizmatiga — noroziligingiz, variant va sabab, kelajakda xabarni oldinroq berish taklifi.

Namuna reja (Email 2): I was disappointed to learn… → buyurtma tug‘ilgan kun sovg‘asi edi, sanasi muhim → to‘liq qaytarib berishni tanlaysiz → taklif: kechikish haqida SMS yuborish.

Rasmiy xat boshlanishi va yakunlari uchun ko‘proq iboralar Business email opening va closing maqolasida. Yozish bo‘limining ikkinchi qismi — Multilevel Writing Part 2. Butun bo‘lim bo‘yicha tayyorgarlik tizimi CEFR Multilevel Writing rejasida.

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