IELTS Writing process diagram: passiv gaplar va namuna javob

Process diagram savolida siz jarayonning har bir bosqichini tartib bilan tasvirlaysiz: nima qilinadi, qayerda va keyin nima bo‘ladi. Raqam yo‘q, shuning uchun baho asosan uch narsaga bog‘liq: barcha bosqichlarni o‘tkazib yubormaslik, ularni ketma-ketlik iboralari bilan bog‘lash va passiv gaplarni to‘g‘ri tuzish.

Rasmiy formatga ko‘ra Academic Task 1 da jarayon, voqea, obyekt yoki qurilma diagrammasi berilishi mumkin; javob kamida 150 so‘z, vaqt taxminan 20 daqiqa. Pastdagi diagramma va javob mashq uchun tuzilgan, rasmiy IELTS materiali emas.

Mashq savoli

The diagram below shows how raw cotton is turned into yarn. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.

Diagrammada sakkizta rasm va strelka bor:

1. Field: cotton is picked by machine.
2. Truck: raw cotton is transported to a ginnery.
3. Ginning: fibres are separated from the seeds. Bir strelka chetga chiqadi: seeds → cottonseed oil.
4. Pressing: fibres are pressed into bales.
5. Spinning mill: bales are opened and the fibres are cleaned.
6. Carding: fibres are combed into a thick, soft rope called sliver.
7. Spinning: sliver is twisted into yarn.
8. Winding: yarn is wound onto cones and sent to textile factories.

Diagrammani 3 daqiqada o‘qish

1. Bosqichlarni sanang va raqamlang. Rasmlar yoniga 1, 2, 3 deb yozing. Imtihonda bir bosqichni tushirib qoldirish eng ko‘p uchraydigan xato.
2. Boshi va oxirini toping. Bu overview’ning asosiy materiali: “paxta dalada teriladi → ip konuslarda fabrikaga jo‘natiladi”.
3. Jarayon turini aniqlang. To‘g‘ri chiziqli (linear) yoki aylanma (cyclical)? Bu yerda linear, bitta qo‘shimcha tarmoq bilan (urug‘dan yog‘).
4. Joylarni guruhlang. Dala va ginnery bir bo‘lak, spinning mill ikkinchi bo‘lak. Bu ikki body paragraf uchun tayyor bo‘linish.
5. Fe’llarni ostiga chizing. Pick, transport, separate, press, clean, comb, twist, wind. Har birining V3 shaklini tekshiring: wind → wound, send → sent.

Izohli namuna javob

The diagram illustrates the stages involved in turning raw cotton into yarn that can be used by the textile industry.

Overall, the process consists of eight stages, beginning with the harvest in the field and ending with finished yarn being sent to factories. It is a linear process that takes place in two main locations, a ginnery and a spinning mill, and it also produces seeds as a by-product.

First, the cotton is picked by machine and transported by truck to a ginnery. There, the fibres are separated from the seeds, which are sent elsewhere to produce cottonseed oil. The fibres are then pressed into large bales so that they can be stored and moved easily.

At the spinning mill, the bales are opened and the fibres are thoroughly cleaned. Next, they are combed into a thick, soft rope known as sliver. This sliver is then twisted into yarn, which is finally wound onto cones before being sent to textile factories.

Javob taxminan 160 so‘z.

Izohlar:

• Overview bosqichlar sonini, boshi va oxirini, jarayon turini va qo‘shimcha mahsulotni aytadi. Qanday qilib 2–3 asosiy xususiyat tanlash haqida: IELTS Writing Task 1 overview.
• Paragraflar joy bo‘yicha bo‘lingan: ginnery va spinning mill. Joy o‘zgarishi o‘quvchiga yo‘l ko‘rsatadi.
• Passiv har bir bosqichda: is picked, are separated, are pressed, is twisted, is wound. Jarayonda kim bajarishi muhim emas, shuning uchun by workers yozilmaydi. By machine va by truck esa yangi ma’lumot beradi.
• Relative clause bilan ikki bosqich bitta gapga birlashdi: the seeds, which are sent elsewhere… va yarn, which is finally wound…
• Before being sent — passiv gerund. U before it is sent bilan bir xil ma’noda, lekin qisqaroq.
• Diagrammadagi so‘zlar (ginnery, sliver, bales) ishlatilgan, lekin gaplar diagrammadagi yozuvlardan ko‘chirilmagan: combed into a thick, soft rope known as sliver.
• Xulosa yo‘q. Task 1 da overview yetarli; oxiriga fikr qo‘shilmaydi.

Ketma-ketlik iboralari

Har bosqichni After that bilan boshlamang. Beshta ketma-ket After that imtihonchiga cheklangan bog‘lovchi zaxirasini ko‘rsatadi. Bog‘lanish haqida batafsil: Coherence and Cohesion.

Passiv yoki aktiv? Inson yoki mashina bajaradigan (sun’iy) jarayonda passiv ko‘proq tabiiy: the fibres are cleaned. Tabiiy jarayonda (suv aylanishi, qurbaqaning hayot sikli) aktiv ko‘p ishlatiladi: water evaporates, the tadpole grows legs. Evaporate, grow, happen kabi o‘timsiz fe’llardan passiv yasalmaydi.

O‘zbek o‘quvchilar qiladigan xatolar

• The cotton is pick by machine. V3 tushib qolgan. To‘g‘ri: is picked.
• Fibres is separated. Ko‘plikka is. To‘g‘ri: Fibres are separated.
• The cotton was picked, then it was transported. Diagramma umumiy jarayonni ko‘rsatadi, o‘tgan zamon kerak emas. To‘g‘ri: is picked … is transported.
• Raw cotton is gone to a ginnery. Go o‘timsiz, passiv bo‘lmaydi. To‘g‘ri: is taken / is transported to a ginnery.
• It is happened at the mill. To‘g‘ri: It happens at the mill yoki This takes place at the mill.
• Cotton is transported to ginnery. Artikl tushib qolgan; o‘zbek va rus tillarida artikl yo‘qligi sabab. To‘g‘ri: to a ginnery, keyin the ginnery.
• The seeds are used for make oil. To‘g‘ri: to make oil yoki for making oil.
• Bosqich tushib qolishi. Ayniqsa qo‘shimcha tarmoq (urug‘ → yog‘). Yozib bo‘lgach, rasmlarni raqam bo‘yicha matndagi fe’llar bilan solishtiring.

Passivni xavfsiz murakkablashtirish haqida: Grammar range and accuracy.

Mashq 1: passiv shaklini qo‘ying

Jarayon (mashq uchun): o‘rik qoqisini tayyorlash.

• 1. Ripe apricots ___ (pick) by hand in early summer.
• 2. They ___ (wash) and ___ (cut) in half.
• 3. The stones ___ (remove) and ___ (send) to a factory, where they ___ (crack) to obtain the kernels.
• 4. The fruit ___ (lay) out on wooden trays.
• 5. The apricots ___ (dry) in the sun for about a week.
• 6. Once they ___ (dry), they ___ (pack) into bags.
• 7. Finally, the dried apricots ___ (sell) at markets such as Chorsu.

Javoblar:

• 1. are picked
• 2. are washed, cut (ikkinchi are takrorlanmaydi)
• 3. are removed, sent, are cracked
• 4. is laid (lay → laid, lie bilan adashtirmang)
• 5. dry (aktiv, o‘timsiz fe’l) yoki are dried (agar kimdir quritsa). Ikkalasi to‘g‘ri, are dry noto‘g‘ri.
• 6. have been dried, are packed
• 7. are sold

Mashq 2: overview yozing

Yuqoridagi o‘rik jarayoni uchun ikki gaplik overview yozing. 3 daqiqa.

Namuna overview: Overall, there are seven main stages in the process, starting with the harvest of ripe apricots and ending with the dried fruit being sold. The process is largely manual and depends on natural sunlight, and it also produces kernels from the stones as a by-product.

Tekshiring: bosqichlar sonini aytdingizmi? Boshi va oxiri bormi? Qo‘shimcha mahsulot yoki jarayon turini qayd etdingizmi?

Mashq 3: to‘liq javob

20 daqiqa taymer qo‘ying va o‘rik jarayoni bo‘yicha to‘liq javob yozing: kirish, overview, ikki body. Body’larni joy bo‘yicha (bog‘ va ishlov berish) yoki bosqichning yarmi bo‘yicha bo‘ling. Keyin tekshiring: yettala bosqich ham bormi, har gapda passiv to‘g‘rimi, After that ikkitadan ko‘p emasmi?

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