IELTS Writing grammar range and accuracy: xatosiz murakkab gaplar

Grammatical Range and Accuracy IELTS Writing’dagi to‘rt mezondan biri va u ikki narsani birga baholaydi: turli gap tuzilmalaridan foydalana olishingiz (range) va ularni xatosiz yoza olishingiz (accuracy). Murakkab gaplarni sun’iy tiqish ball bermaydi, agar ular xato bilan to‘la bo‘lsa. Eng samarali yo‘l — ma’noga mos kelgan joyda bir nechta ishonchli tuzilmani ishlatish va o‘z takroriy xatolaringizni yo‘q qilish. Quyida sakkiz tuzilma, tahlil qilingan namuna esse, o‘zbek o‘quvchilarining tipik xatolari va javobli mashq bor.

Mezon haqida rasmiy ma’lumot

IELTS baholash sahifasiga ko‘ra, Writing’ning har bir topshirig‘i to‘rt teng mezon bilan baholanadi va Grammatical Range and Accuracy ulardan biri. Band darajalarining to‘liq tavsifi shu sahifadagi Writing band descriptors PDF faylida. Descriptors’da bu mezon ikki o‘q bo‘ylab tasvirlanadi: tuzilmalar xilma-xilligi va xatolar qanchalik ko‘p hamda ma’noga qanchalik ta’sir qilishi. Ya’ni bir nechta mayda xato ham, oddiy gaplar bilan cheklanish ham bahoga ta’sir qiladi.

Task 2 rasmiy formatga ko‘ra kamida 250 so‘z va taxminan 40 daqiqa. Bu vaqtda har gapni murakkab qilishga urinish xatolar sonini oshiradi. Oddiy va murakkab gaplarning aralashmasi tabiiyroq o‘qiladi.

Range va accuracy: nimani anglatadi

Esse uchun sakkiz ishonchli tuzilma

Misollar bir mavzuda: yolg‘iz yashayotgan odamlar soni.

1. Relative clause (ergash aniqlovchi gap): People who live alone often have more free time.
2. Non-defining relative clause (vergul bilan): Many young adults marry later, which means that they live independently for longer.
3. Real shart gap: If a person lives alone, they may go for days without a real conversation.
4. Noreal shart gap: If housing were cheaper, even more young people would move out.
5. Majhul nisbat: These skills are rarely acquired while someone else is taking care of you.
6. Qarama-qarshilik ergash gapi: Although isolation is a real danger, the trend is largely positive.
7. Gerund ega sifatida: Having their own space gives adults more freedom.
8. Qiyosiy tuzilma: People are marrying later than previous generations did.

Ulardan har birini bir marta ishlatish shart emas. Maqsad — ro‘yxatni to‘ldirish emas, ma’no talab qilganda tayyor tuzilmaga ega bo‘lish.

Mashq savoli va reja

Mashq topshirig‘i (rasmiy savol emas): In many countries, more and more people are choosing to live alone. Why is this happening? Is it a positive or negative development?

Bu ikki qismli savol: sabablar va baho. Ikkala savolga to‘liq javob berish haqida two-part question sahifasida batafsil yozilgan.

Namuna esse (mashq uchun, taxminan 270 so‘z)

In many countries, the number of people who live alone has risen considerably over the past few decades. This essay will explain why this is happening and argue that the trend is mostly positive, provided that isolation is prevented.

The main reason for the change is economic. As incomes have grown, more young adults can afford to rent a flat of their own instead of staying with their parents until they marry. Another factor is that people are marrying later than previous generations did, which means that many spend their twenties living independently. In addition, better healthcare allows elderly people to remain in their own homes for longer rather than moving in with their children.

In my view, this development is largely positive. Young people who manage their own household learn to budget, cook and solve everyday problems, skills that are rarely acquired while someone else is taking care of them. Having their own space also gives adults more freedom to focus on their studies or careers. For older people, being able to stay in a familiar home can protect their sense of independence.

Nevertheless, living alone can lead to loneliness if it is not balanced by social contact. If a person works from home and lives by themselves, they may go for days without a real conversation. Communities could reduce this risk by supporting clubs, shared spaces and regular visits to elderly residents. Neighbours, too, can play a part simply by keeping in touch.

In conclusion, people are living alone more often because of higher incomes, later marriage and longer, healthier lives. Although isolation is a real danger, I believe the trend is a positive one overall.

Namunaga band qo‘yilmagan va u rasmiy javob emas.

Namunadagi tuzilmalar

E’tibor bering: essedagi oddiy gaplar ham bor (The main reason for the change is economic.). Qisqa gap urg‘u beradi va xato xavfini kamaytiradi.

O‘zbek o‘quvchilarining tipik xatolari

Bu jadvaldagi xatolar bittasining o‘zi bahoni tushirmaydi, lekin 270 so‘zli esseda o‘n–o‘n besh marta takrorlansa, o‘quvchi uchun sezilarli bo‘ladi. Shuning uchun eng foydali mashq — o‘zingizning uch–to‘rtta takroriy xatongizni topib, har esseda ularni alohida tekshirish.

Mashq: xatoni tuzating

Har gapda bitta grammatik xato bor.

1. Most of students in my group live with their parents.
2. If rents will fall, more young people will move out.
3. Living alone teach people to be responsible.
4. The elderly people often prefer to stay in their own homes.
5. Although living alone is expensive, but many people choose it.
6. Loneliness can be reduce by joining clubs.
7. Many researches show that social contact is important.
8. She has moved to Tashkent two years ago.

Javoblar:

• 1 — Most students yoki Most of the students.
• 2 — If rents fall, … (if dan keyin kelasi zamon ishlatilmaydi).
• 3 — Living alone teaches… (gerund ega birlikda).
• 4 — Elderly people often prefer… yoki The elderly often prefer…
• 5 — but ni olib tashlang: Although…, many people choose it.
• 6 — can be reduced.
• 7 — Much research shows… yoki Many studies show…
• 8 — She moved to Tashkent two years ago. (ago bilan past simple)

8 tadan 6 tasini to‘g‘ri topsangiz, keyingi qadam — o‘z esselaringizdagi xatolarni shu tarzda ro‘yxatga olish.

Besh daqiqalik grammatik tekshiruv

Esse tugagach, butun matnni bir marta o‘qish yetarli emas. Har o‘qishda bitta narsani qidiring:

1. Ega va kesim: har gapning egasini toping, kesim unga mosmi (people are, the number is)?
2. Artikllar: har bir birlikdagi sanaladigan ot oldida a/an/the yoki boshqa aniqlovchi bormi?
3. Zamonlar: since/for bilan present perfect, ago va aniq yil bilan past simple.
4. Gap chegaralari: vergul bilan ulangan ikki mustaqil gap yo‘qmi?
5. Shaxsiy ro‘yxat: siz ko‘p qiladigan uchta xato.

To‘liq tekshirish tartibi proofreading checklistda berilgan. Gaplar orasidagi bog‘lanish uchun esa coherence and cohesion sahifasini ko‘ring.

Mustaqil mashq

Mashq topshirig‘i (rasmiy savol emas): In some countries, many young people cannot afford to buy their own home. What are the causes of this problem, and what can be done about it?

Yozishdan oldin rejaga har paragraf uchun bitta tuzilmani belgilang, masalan: Body 1 — As prices have risen, …; Body 2 — If the government built more affordable flats, …; xulosa — Although…, …. Yozib bo‘lgach, har tuzilma to‘g‘ri ishlatilganini tekshiring va xatolaringizni daftardagi ro‘yxatga qo‘shing.

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Manbalar

• IELTS: baholash tafsilotlari va Writing band descriptors
• IELTS: Academic Writing testining rasmiy formati

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