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Multilevel Writing Task 1.1: 50 so‘zli norasmiy xat namunalari

Multilevel Writing 1.1: do‘stga 50 so‘zli norasmiy email. Rasmiy 0–5 mezon, 4 gaplik tuzilma, 3 ta namuna, 90 so‘zni 50 ga qisqartirish va javobli mashq.

Telefonini ushlab, nimanidir ko‘rsatayotgan qiz — do‘stga qisqa xabar yozish vaziyati

Multilevel Writing 1.1 topshirig‘ida tashkilotdan kelgan qisqa xatni o‘qiysiz va shu vaziyat haqida do‘stingizga taxminan 50 so‘zli norasmiy email yozasiz. Odatda his-tuyg‘ungizni va nima qilmoqchi ekaningizni aytish so‘raladi. Bu topshiriq B1 darajaga mo‘ljallangan va alohida 0–5 ball bilan baholanadi. 50 so‘zga to‘rtta gap sig‘adi: munosabat, sabab, reja va do‘stga savol.

Bir vaziyat bo‘yicha ikkala xatni (do‘stga va rahbariyatga) yonma-yon ko‘rmoqchi bo‘lsangiz, Multilevel Writing Email sahifasiga qarang. Bu yerda faqat birinchi, qisqa xat: mezon, tuzilma, uchta yangi namuna va qisqartirish mashqi.

Rasmiy hujjat 1.1 haqida nima deydi

Agentlik 2025-yil oktabrda e’lon qilgan yozish bo‘limi topshiriq tafsilotlari bo‘yicha:

Ko‘rsatkich1.1 topshirig‘i
Kiruvchi matn50–80 so‘zli rasmiy, shaxssiz xat; unda javob berilishi kerak bo‘lgan 3 ta band bor
Kimga yoziladiShaxsan tanish odamga (do‘stga)
UslubNorasmiy
HajmTaxminan 50 so‘z (tavsiya etilgan chegara)
DarajaB1
Ball0–5; 3–4 ball uchun B1 darajadagi javob kerak, 5 ball B1 dan yuqori javobga beriladi
VaqtButun yozish bo‘limi 60 daqiqa; 1-qismga (ikki xat) taxminan 25 daqiqa tavsiya etiladi

Hujjatdagi namuna ko‘rsatma: sayohat klubi a’zosi sifatida klubdan xat olgansiz va do‘stingizga his-tuyg‘ularingiz va nima qilishni rejalashtirayotganingiz haqida yozasiz.

Ball qanday qo‘yiladi

Yozish bo‘limining baholash mezonlarida 1.1 uchun alohida shkala bor. Qisqacha mazmuni:

BallDarajaAsosiy belgilar
5B1 dan yuqoriJavob B1 saviyasidan yuqori
4Yuqori B1Talablarning ko‘p qismi bajarilgan; oddiy grammatika xatosiz, murakkab tuzilmalarda xato bor; imlo asosan to‘g‘ri; so‘z boyligi yetarli; oddiy bog‘lovchilar bilan yaxlit matn
3Quyi B1Talablardan kamida bittasi bajarilgan; qolgan belgilar 4 ballga o‘xshash
2A2Talablarning faqat bir qismi; xatolar tushunishga xalaqit beradi; javob talab etilgan hajmning yarmi yoki undan kam bo‘lishi mumkin
1A1 yoki pastA2 dan past, ona tilidan ko‘p foydalanilgan, ma’nosiz yoki butunlay mavzudan tashqari (yodlangan, ko‘chirilgan)
0—Javob yozilmagan

Ikki amaliy xulosa. Birinchidan, ko‘rsatmadagi har bir talab (masalan, his-tuyg‘u va reja) alohida tekshiriladi: bittasini unutsangiz, 3 balldan yuqoriga chiqish qiyin. Ikkinchidan, kiruvchi xatdan gaplarni ko‘chirish yoki yodlangan “universal xat” yozish past ballga olib keladi.

50 so‘zlik tuzilma: 4 gap

QismNima qilasizSo‘zMisol
SalomIsm bilan, qisqa2Hi Jasur,
1-gapYangilikka ishora8–10Did you see the message from the dorm office?
2-gapHis-tuyg‘u va sabab12–15I’m not happy about it, because…
3-gapReja12–15I think I’ll stay with my aunt until…
4-gapDo‘stga savol yoki taklif8–10Why don’t you…? / Shall we…?
XayrlashuvQisqa2–3Take care, Bekzod

Salom va imzo so‘z sanog‘iga kirishi yoki kirmasligi rasmiy hujjatda aytilmagan. Xavfsiz yo‘l — asosiy matnni 45–55 so‘z oralig‘ida saqlash.

Uchta namuna (practice)

Quyidagi topshiriqlar va javoblar mashq uchun yozilgan, rasmiy test materiali emas.

1. Yotoqxonada issiq suv yo‘q

Kiruvchi xat: Dear residents, Hot water will be turned off in Block A from 10 to 14 November for pipe repairs. During this time you may move temporarily to Block C, use the sports centre showers, or stay elsewhere. Please inform the office of your choice by 5 November.

Topshiriq: Write to your friend who lives in the same block. Tell them how you feel and what you are going to do. Write about 50 words.

Hi Jasur,

Did you see the message from the dorm office? No hot water for five days — in November! I’m not happy about it, to be honest. I think I’ll stay with my aunt in Sergeli until it’s fixed. Why don’t you ask to move to Block C? It’s warmer there.

Take care,
Bekzod

49 so‘z (salom va imzosiz). His-tuyg‘u (not happy), reja (stay with my aunt) va do‘stga maslahat bor. Did you see…?, to be honest, qisqargan shakllar — norasmiy uslub belgisi.

2. Til markazi ilovaga o‘tadi

Kiruvchi xat: From 1 December, all our lessons will use the LinguaHub app instead of paper books. Please download the app and create an account before 25 November. We welcome your feedback.

Topshiriq: Write to a friend who studies at the same centre. Tell them what you think about the change and what you will do.

Hey Malika,

Big news from the language centre — no more paper books from next month! I’m a bit sad because I love writing notes in them. Still, the new app sounds useful. I’m going to download it tonight and set up my account before the deadline. Shall we try it together on Saturday?

See you,
Dildora

51 so‘z. Still, bilan qarama-qarshi fikr qo‘shildi — bu “oddiy bog‘lovchilar bilan yaxlit matn” talabiga mos. Reja aniq: tonight, before the deadline.

3. Marafon vaqti o‘zgardi

Kiruvchi xat: Due to the heat, the city marathon on 8 June will start at 6:30 instead of 8:00. Runners who prefer a later start may switch to the 10 km race, which begins at 8:00. Please confirm your choice online.

Topshiriq: Write to your friend who is also running. Tell them how you feel and suggest what to do.

Hi Timur,

Have you read the marathon email? Starting at 6:30 is crazy — I’ll have to get up at five! Honestly, I’m thinking of switching to the 10 km race. It’s shorter and starts later, so we can sleep a bit more. What do you think? Let’s decide by Friday.

Cheers,
Rustam

48 so‘z. Taklif ikki marta aniq aytilgan: I’m thinking of switching… va Let’s decide by Friday.

90 so‘zdan 50 so‘zga: qisqartirish mashqi

Ko‘p o‘quvchilar 1.1 ga 80–100 so‘z yozadi. Qo‘shimcha ball berilmaydi, lekin 1.2 va 2-qismga vaqt kamayadi. Mana 1-namunaning “qoralama” shakli:

Dear my friend Jasur, how are you? I hope you are fine and your family is also fine. I am writing this letter to inform you that I received an email from the dormitory office. According to the email, there will be no hot water for five days because of repair works. I am very disappointed and angry about this situation because it is November and it is very cold. Therefore, I have decided that I will stay at my aunt’s house in Sergeli during these days. Write me soon.

Nimani olib tashlaymiz va nega:

  • Dear my friend Jasur — grammatik xato va rasmiy ohang. → Hi Jasur,
  • How are you? I hope you are fine and your family is also fine. — 14 so‘z, topshiriqqa aloqasi yo‘q.
  • I am writing this letter to inform you that… — rasmiy xat iborasi, do‘stga yozilmaydi.
  • According to the email — rasmiy. → Did you see the message…?
  • Therefore, I have decided that I will… — og‘ir. → I think I’ll…
  • Write me soon. — do‘stga savol yoki taklif bilan almashtiring, xat jonliroq bo‘ladi.

Natija — yuqoridagi 49 so‘zli namuna. Mazmun o‘sha, lekin uslub to‘g‘ri va vaqt tejaldi.

O‘zbek o‘quvchilarining tipik xatolari

Noto‘g‘riTo‘g‘riIzoh
Dear my friend,Hi Aziz, / Hey Aziz,Dear my… inglizchada ishlatilmaydi
I am agree with you.I agree with you.agree — fe’l, am kerak emas
I very like this idea.I really like this idea.very fe’lni kuchaytirmaydi
I will go to my aunt house.I’ll go to my aunt’s (house).Qarashlilik: aunt’s
Faqat reja, his-tuyg‘u yo‘qI’m annoyed / excited / worried because…Ikkala talabni ham bajaring
Yours faithfully, BekzodTake care, / See you, / Cheers,Rasmiy yakun do‘stga to‘g‘ri kelmaydi

Mashq: rasmiy iborani norasmiyga aylantiring

Har bir gapni do‘stga yoziladigan xatga moslab qayta yozing.

  • 1. I am writing to inform you that the club will close.
  • 2. I would be grateful if you could call me.
  • 3. I regret to say that I cannot attend.
  • 4. Please accept my apologies for the late reply.
  • 5. I look forward to hearing from you.
  • 6. It would be advisable to book early.
  • 7. I am extremely dissatisfied with this decision.
  • 8. Dear my friend,

Javoblar

Boshqa tabiiy variantlar ham to‘g‘ri, muhimi — ohang.

  • 1. Guess what? The club’s closing!
  • 2. Can you give me a call?
  • 3. Sorry, I can’t make it.
  • 4. Sorry it took me so long to reply!
  • 5. Write back soon! / Speak soon!
  • 6. You’d better book early.
  • 7. I’m really annoyed about it.
  • 8. Hi Aziz, (do‘stning ismi bilan)

8 tadan 6 tasi sizda norasmiy chiqqan bo‘lsa, uslubni his qilyapsiz. Qolganlarini bog‘lovchilar va linking words ro‘yxatidagi so‘zlashuv bog‘lovchilari bilan mustahkamlang.

Keyingi qadam

1.1 ni 6–8 daqiqada yozishni o‘rganing, shunda rasmiy xatga yetarli vaqt qoladi. Rasmiy xatning tuzilmasi va iboralari Writing Task 1.2 sahifasida. Butun bo‘lim uchun 60 daqiqalik reja CEFR Multilevel Writing maqolasida.

BandMate bilan

BandMate yozma ishingizni rasmiy mezon bo‘yicha baholamaydi. Ammo bitta yangilikni Bandi’ga avval do‘stga aytgandek, keyin rasmiy tarzda aytib ko‘rish uslub farqini tez sezishga yordam beradi. Og‘zaki aytilgan 4 gap yozishda ham tayyor skeletga aylanadi.

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