Multilevel Writing Task 1.2: rasmiy xat, iboralar va namuna

Multilevel Writing 1.2 topshirig‘ida 1.1 dagi vaziyatning o‘zi bo‘yicha rahbariyat, mijozlar xizmati yoki boshqa rasmiy shaxsga 120–150 so‘zli rasmiy email yozasiz. Bu xat B2 darajaga mo‘ljallangan va alohida 0–5 ball bilan baholanadi. Yuqori ball uchun ko‘rsatmadagi barcha talablarni bajarish, uslubni oxirigacha rasmiy saqlash va fikrlarni bog‘lovchilar bilan ulash kerak. Eng qulay tuzilma — to‘rt paragraf: sabab, ta’sir yoki tanlov, taklif, yakun.

Rasmiy talablar

Agentlikning 2025-yil oktabrdagi yozish bo‘limi topshiriq tafsilotlari bo‘yicha:

• Xat kiruvchi matndagi vaziyat asosida notanish yoki rasmiy shaxsga yoziladi (rahbariyat, mijozlar xizmati va h.k.). Qabul qiluvchi ko‘rsatmada aniq aytiladi.
• Hajm — 120–150 so‘z.
• Javobda B2 darajadagi grammatika, bog‘lovchi vositalar va izchillik ko‘rsatilishi kerak; hujjat bu xat uchun K4–K5 darajadagi so‘z boyligini yetarli deb hisoblaydi.
• Ko‘rsatma xatning maqsadini aytadi: shikoyat qilish, muqobil variant taklif qilish, maslahat berish va h.k.
• 1.1 va 1.2 birgalikda taxminan 25 daqiqaga mo‘ljallangan; butun yozish bo‘limi 60 daqiqa.

Baholash shkalasi: 0 dan 5 gacha

Baholash mezonlaridagi 1.2 shkalasining qisqa mazmuni:

3 va 4 ball orasidagi chegara ikki narsada: hamma talab bajarildimi va uslub oxirigacha rasmiy qoldimi. Bitta don’t yoki Hi! uchun ball kesilmasligi mumkin, lekin norasmiy bo‘laklar ko‘paysa, “uslub to‘liq mos” tavsifi yo‘qoladi.

To‘rt paragraflik reja

Har bir talab alohida paragrafda bo‘lsa, tekshiruvchi ularni bir qarashda topadi. Yozishdan oldin ko‘rsatmadagi fe’llarni sanab chiqing: say how you feel, explain, suggest — uchta fe’l, uchta paragraf.

Iboralar: vazifa bo‘yicha

Namuna (practice): kutubxona erta yopiladi

Topshiriq va javob mashq uchun yozilgan, rasmiy test materiali emas.

Kiruvchi xat: Dear students, Due to budget changes, from 1 May the main library will close at 6 p.m. instead of 10 p.m., including the exam period. Students may use the study rooms in the dormitories or our online library. We welcome your comments. Library Administration

Task 1.2. Write to the library director. Say how you feel about the change, explain how it affects you and suggest an alternative. Write 120–150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing regarding your recent announcement that the university library will close at 6 p.m. instead of 10 p.m. during the exam period. While I understand the need to reduce costs, I am concerned about the timing of this change.

Like many students, I work part-time during the day, so the evening is the only time I can study in a quiet place. The dormitory study rooms are usually crowded, and the online library does not include most of the textbooks on our reading lists.

I would therefore like to suggest a compromise. Would it be possible to keep one reading room open until 10 p.m. with a single member of staff? Alternatively, volunteers from the student council could help to supervise it.

I would be grateful if you could consider this proposal.

Yours faithfully,
Nilufar Karimova

134 so‘z (murojaat va imzosiz). Tahlil:

• 1-paragraf — his-tuyg‘u. While I understand…, I am concerned… — norozilikni muloyim, lekin aniq aytadi. Bu bitta murakkab gap.
• 2-paragraf — ta’sir. Shaxsiy sabab (work part-time) va kiruvchi xatdagi ikkala variantga javob: yotoqxona xonalari gavjum, onlayn kutubxonada kitoblar yo‘q. Tekshiruvchi siz xatni diqqat bilan o‘qiganingizni ko‘radi.
• 3-paragraf — taklif. Would it be possible…? va Alternatively — ikki variant, ikkalasi ham amalga oshirsa bo‘ladigan.
• Uslub. Qisqargan shakl yo‘q, Dear Sir or Madam ga Yours faithfully mos.

3 ball va 4 ball: bitta paragraf ikki xil

Quyidagi misollar shkalani tushunish uchun tahririyat tomonidan yozilgan; bu rasmiy baho emas.

Zaifroq variant:

I’m writing about the library. I think closing at 6 is not good idea, because I work in the day and I can study only in evening. Also dormitory rooms are very noisy and online library don’t have books. I want you to open it until 10.

Nima yetishmaydi: qisqargan shakl (I’m), artikllar (a good idea, in the evening), moslashuv (doesn’t have). Eng muhimi — I want you to… taklif emas, talab. Rasmiy xatda bu ohang “uslub to‘liq mos” tavsifidan uzoqlashtiradi. Tuzatilgan variant — yuqoridagi namunaning 2- va 3-paragrafi.

O‘zbek o‘quvchilarining tipik xatolari

• Ruscha tuzilma: I want that you give me… (ruscha хочу, чтобы). To‘g‘risi: I would like you to… yoki I would be grateful if you could…
• Fe’l va predlog: explain me the reason → explain the reason to me; discuss about → discuss.
• “Very very” bilan kuchaytirish. Rasmiy xatda very very bad o‘rniga extremely disappointing yoki unacceptable.
• Vaziyatni qayta hikoya qilish. Kiruvchi xatni o‘z so‘zlaringiz bilan to‘liq takrorlash 30–40 so‘zni yeydi. Birinchi gapda bitta ibora bilan ishora qiling va o‘z fikringizga o‘ting.
• Uchinchi talabni unutish. Yozib bo‘lgach, ko‘rsatmadagi har bir fe’lning yoniga paragraf raqamini yozing.

Mashq: gaplarni rasmiy xatga moslang

Har bir gapni 1.2 uchun mos shaklga keltiring.

• 1. I want that you give me my money back.
• 2. I am writing you because I have a problem.
• 3. Your service was very very bad.
• 4. Please, answer me quickly.
• 5. I’m gonna cancel my membership.
• 6. Can you explain me the reason?
• 7. Dear Sir or Madam, … Yours sincerely,
• 8. In conclusion, I want to say thank you.

Javoblar

Mazmunan shunga yaqin boshqa rasmiy variantlar ham to‘g‘ri.

• 1. I would be grateful if you could give me a full refund.
• 2. I am writing to you regarding a problem with my order.
• 3. I was extremely disappointed with the quality of the service.
• 4. I would appreciate a prompt reply.
• 5. I intend to cancel my membership.
• 6. Could you please explain the reason to me?
• 7. Dear Sir or Madam, … Yours faithfully, (ism noma’lum bo‘lsa)
• 8. Thank you for considering my request.

Qayerdan davom etish

Shu vaziyat bo‘yicha qisqa do‘stona xat uchun Writing Task 1.1 sahifasiga o‘ting. Bitta topshiriqqa ikkala xat yonma-yon berilgan namuna Multilevel Writing Emailda. Murojaat va yakun iboralarini kengaytirish uchun business email opening va closing ro‘yxatiga qarang. Yozish bo‘limining eng og‘ir qismi esa Writing Part 2.

BandMate bilan

BandMate rasmiy xatni tekshirib ball qo‘ymaydi. Lekin 2- va 3-paragrafdagi fikrni Bandi bilan avval og‘zaki aytib ko‘rish foydali: “menga qanday ta’sir qiladi” va “nima taklif qilaman” degan savollarga bir daqiqada javob topsangiz, yozish vaqtida faqat rasmiy shaklga solish qoladi.

Manbalar

• Agentlik: yozish bo‘limi, yangi format topshiriq tafsilotlari (PDF)
• Agentlik: yozish bo‘limi, yangi format baholash mezonlari (PDF)
• Bilim va malakalarni baholash agentligi: baholash mezonlari sahifasi (gov.uz)

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